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Highlights of a week of poetry with Arvon at Lumb Bank, Yorkshire

6/23/2017

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Sign pointing to Lumb Bank in Yorkshire
Sylvia Plath's grave, Heptonstall near Hebden Bridge, Yorkshire
It took me less time than I expected to find Sylvia Plath’s grave in the cemetery in Heptonstall, a village near Hebden Bridge. The visit was a fitting ritual at the start of a week of writing poetry at the former home of Ted Hughes at Lumb Bank just down the hill.

    The 18th-century mill owner’s house overlooking a wooded valley has been welcoming writers for Arvon courses and retreats since 1975. When I had made my way down the steep hill from the main road a comfy room with a desk that was begging to be written at was waiting for me. Downstairs a fresh pot of tea along with a large tin of biscuits was in the lounge where I met the other people I would be spending the week with. It was my first time on an Arvon course but many participants were veterans drawn back again and again by the hospitality, food, beautiful locations and expert tuition by some of the best practising writers around.

Arvon Writing Centre, Lumb Bank, Yorkshire
Writing desk at Lumb Bank, Arvon Centre
    This week-long course was devoted to poetry. The ten participants were all experienced and accomplished poets looking to take their work to the next level with the help of tutors Colette Bryce and John McAuliffe. Over the next five days I was immersed in reading, writing and enjoying the simple pleasures of country life and home cooking away. Here are my top 10 Arvon highlights:

1. One-to-one tuition. The opportunity to discuss my poetry with the tutors was invaluable. With a few pencil strokes John and Colette showed how to fix the weak parts of my poems whether it was a stanza, line or single word. They could also recommend off the top of their heads poems I should read to get a better idea of how to improve my work. After my first session with John he sent me away with a heavy stack of books from the centre’s well stocked library.

2. Classes that pushed us to the next level. During morning sessions we focused on imagery, creative uses of form, the many different forms of the sonnet and picked apart the works of great poets including Sylvia Plath, Seamus Heaney, Elizabeth Bishop, Paul Muldoon and many more. We also did regular writing exercises many of which proved fruitful and it was interesting to hear what other participants came up with.

3. Food! From a well stocked buffet at lunchtime to scrumptious home-cooked dinners the week was a non-stop banquet. Evening meals were cooked by people on the course. Everyone took it in turns to cook in a team of two or three. My team managed to produce a decent chicken curry and apricot crumble on the Wednesday night. Far from being an unwanted chore it was a great opportunity to get to know other participants and seeing the rest of the group tucking into a meal I had helped cook was extremely satisfying. There was also a plentiful supply of wine which we ordered in at the start of the week.
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4. Country walks. With so much food being served it was good to be surrounded by hills and woodland over which to walk it off. Much of my time in the afternoon was spent exploring the area and working up an appetite for the next meal. On Friday we began our last morning session with a walk in the woods. Back at the centre Colette set us a task in which we wrote sentences about the walk beginning I notice… . Afterwards we picked our best ones and went around taking it in turns to read them out, forming a collaborative poem. A couple of my best lines were: I notice the way you look a little further than usual, let nature coax you out of your armour, and I notice the politeness of houses sitting still so as not to disturb the foxgloves.​​
Woodland stream near Lumb Bank, Yorkshire
Woodland walk, Lumb Bank, Yorkshire
Writing desk at Lumb Bank, Arvon Centre
5. Guest poet. In addition to readings and a week’s tuition from John and Colette we had a guest reading from rising star Zaffar Kunnial. His inventive use of language was a great demonstration of all we had been learning about. It was particularly interesting to hear poems he had been commissioned to write including one about the overture on The Beatles’ Sgt. Pepper. The song was a recurring motif but he wove in many other themes and personal experiences. We stayed up late, feasting on cheese and wine as Zaffar regaled us with stories of his former job writing card greetings for Hallmark. 

6. Pub quiz. With no programmed activity on Thursday evening we went to the quiz night at the pub in Heptonstall. After an easy start (What does the T S stand for in the name T. S. Eliot?) the questions got harder and while both teams gained respectable scores we couldn’t beat the local champions. 

7. No news. TV and internet are standard amenities at most places these days but their absence at Lumb Bank was something I soon came to appreciate as I spent my time reading, writing and walking without having to think about the outside world. Basic details of the Grenfell Tower disaster and Donald Trump being investigated by the FBI filtered through but we were cushioned from the deluge of news and analysis that dominates the modern world. 

8. Quality writing time. I put my desk to good use as I worked on writing exercises set in the classes and revised earlier work. I came away with a satisfying collection of new and improved poems.

9. Wildlife. The air was full of birdsong, bees thronged around the flowerbeds in the garden and we even encountered a hedgehog on our way back from the pub. There was also an unofficial resident at the centre, a cat that has learnt that there are always plenty of animal loving writers around to make a fuss of him. 

Cat
10. A week with a wonderful poets. The other participants were great company and a huge inspiration throughout the week. On the final evening we all gave a short reading. There were experienced readers and first timers in the group but the quality of work was of a consistently high standard. At the end of the reading John shared his favourite parts of each poets work. It was nice to hear what parts of my work had made an impression and to be reminded of the many great lines from the other poets. There was much to talk about afterwards and plenty of wine to finish up during the rest of the night.

My week at Arvon has certainly made me a better poet equipping me with new ideas and techniques to develop in the future. A few lessons I took away were:
  • Write better titles - many of mine just repeat what's in the poem.
  • Keep reading.
  • Create powerful images. A good technique for appreciating the images in other poets poems is to draw them.
  • Keep reading.
  • There are many effective ways to play with language and form. The subtle ways the best poets do this requires careful scrutiny.
  • The world won't end if you switch off for a while and work on your writing.
  • Keep reading.

​www.arvon.org
View of valley at Lumb Bank, Yorkshire
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Poetry Non-Stop book launch

9/12/2016

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I know it's been out for a few months but I've finally got round to producing some hard copies so you can read Poetry Non-Stop as a good old fashioned book. I've also organised a little poetry shindig to celebrate on Sunday 18, 2pm at Octavo's Book Cafe and Wine Bar in Cardiff Bay. Octavo's is a great place to buy books, read them and listen to authors read their work too. I'll be reading of course and I've invited a talented bunch of poets to join me. Local poets Adele Cordner, Ann Drysdale and Angela Platt will be reading and Rychard Carrington is coming over from Borth. Rychard is a one-of-a-kind performance poet who is sure to take the Cardiff poetry scene quite unawares.
Don't worry if you are not in Cardiff as I will be streaming the whole thing live on Periscope. Check Twitter for the link at around 2:30pm and enjoy a great afternoon of poetry. More details here.
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Hub Festival Cardiff and Kaya Festival

8/23/2016

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I haven't updated this for a while. It's been a busy summer with the opportunity to perform at Kaya Festival along with the likes of Craig Charles, Asian Dub Foundation, The Selecter and Judge Jules a real highlight. This weekend I'm at the Hub Festival in Cardiff. I'm looking forward to joining the Megaverse programme of poets and spoken word acts hosted by Will Ford between 3 and 7pm on Saturday at the Urban Taphouse. 
Among the other poets performing is Des Mannay who joined me at Kaya Festival at the start of the month. We performed in an atmospheric room in a mansion which was probably haunted before enjoying the rest of the festival. As Des later said: "We smashed it! Then we spent the rest of the day drinking, meeting other artiists and DJ's, drinking, watching bands, drinking, meeting old friends, drinking, making new friends, drinking, eating festival food, drinking.... and erm - did I mention drinking?"

​Here are some photos from Phunked up Photography.
We even made the South Wales Argus:
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NaPoWriMo: Mixing and matching prompts

4/11/2016

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It's been an interesting NaPoWriMo so far. I've been using a few sources for prompts and often find the poems I write come from a combination of two or more prompts. On the first day the NaPoWriMo site prompt was to write a lune – a form similar to haiku with a 5-3-5 syllable count. Turning to Robert Lee Brewer's Poetic Asides the prompt was to write a foolish poem. These prompts resulted in:

Their words seem foolish
because we 
never taught them ours.


On the Found Poetry site Collier Nogues set a prompt that involved creating a poem from a few sources by taking a document adding lines of poetry, yours or other peoples and turning the whole thing into a poem. I took a letter from the tax office, some lines from poem's in Simon Armitage's collection Zoom and some of my own to produce this:

Acknowledgement

Thank you for the crumbs, staples and eyes of potatoes you have supplied. We have sniffed, chewed, dissected and incinerated them and can confirm we will not be asking for anything more as you head into perfect darkness in boxer shorts and bare feet.


I've also engaged in some completely new forms like Woody Leslie's wordblock poems. I had an interesting time piecing this together:
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Other poems have come from simply being out and about, such as this one that I wrote on a coach trip:

Long distance coach trip

Not long after we depart the woman sat next to me yawns, lets her head sink onto my shoulder and clutches my arm murmuring 'Frank.' I haven't the heart to tell her I'm not Frank. The man in front reaches for the armrest. He grabs my leg and pulls it up next to him. Instead of realising his error he digs his elbow in as he continues watching Lethal Weapon on his laptop. It's late when we reach the next stop and no lights come on when the door opens and more passengers embark. The last is a fat man peering through thick glasses. He stops at my seat and flops down on top of me. He pulls my right arm across his chest and inserts my slender fingers in the seatbelt lock. As the coach drives on I fall asleep to the slow muffled beat of his heart.


If you need some inspiration for your poetry check out my book Poetry Non-stop available now on Amazon.
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South Wales Argus

3/20/2016

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I was honoured to be featured in this piece about World Poetry Day in The South Wales Argus along with a couple of other local poets. There are a couple of my poems along with some nice photos. My colleague Mike at Newsquest did a good job with the headline too. Read it here.
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Poetry Non-stop

3/16/2016

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My new book Poetry Non-stop is coming out on March 17th. It's a guide for poets of all levels to writing a poem a day for 30 days coming out ahead of National Poetry Writing Month (NaPoWriMo) in April. I'm really excited about this book. I know it will inspire whoever reads it to write some fantastic and original poems. I hope I get to read them. Grab the book early while the price is low and get set for NaPoWriMo. 
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St Valentine's Day hangover, Southbank, Bristol

2/14/2016

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Friars Walk Exhibition

2/2/2016

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I am taking part in an exhibition on Friars Walk, Newport's new shopping centre, at the Cwtsh community and arts centre. The exhibition features a huge lineup of writers and visual artists. I produced a written piece based on observing the people in the area and it will be accompanied by a photo taken by organiser and talented photographer John Briggs, who also took my photo on the homepage. The area, people, architecture and history of the place is sure to inspire a variety of responses which I look forward to seeing.

The exhibition opening event is on Saturday 7th February at the Cwtsh, Stow Hill, Handpost, Newport, NP20 4HA from 2-5pm. Full details here.
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New year, new website

1/4/2016

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Welcome to my new website. My old site is still available here. There are lots more poems and photos there which I haven't managed to move to this site but I'll be adding plenty more material in the coming months. I hope you like the site and would welcome your feedback.

2015 was a year of many highlights. I went to Iceland, The Secret Garden Party and the Edinburgh festival; I had lots of material published including poems in Agenda Broadsheets and The Interpreter's House; I also had several jokes broadcast on Radio 4 Extra comedy show Newsjack.

Local events such as poetry at The Murenger, Rhyme and Real Ale, Megaverse and Roath Writers have been an inspiration and a great platform for my work. In turn I've provided a platform for other poets via my podcast Headstand. There have been some great poets and inspiring conversations on the episodes so far and I look forward to bringing you more this year. In fact I look forward to doing more of everything: writing, travelling, performing... Happy 2016!
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Kicking off 2016 with a performance at Megaverse, Cardiff. Photo by Paula Hughes.
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